User:Mwashington2020/Cyber-security regulation/Tkmu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mwashington2020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mwashington2020/Cyber-security regulation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cyber-security regulation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content as drafted appears to be focused on one element of Cyber-security regulation that may be lacking within the current context. As written it essentially states that the utilitarian and almost machiavellian approach of pen testing where the ends of securing systems outweighs the means that in some cases may have negative effects on impacted users, I believe this is hinting at improving pen testing, specifically the social engineering aspect of it that might require Institutional Review Board (IRB) consideration. The provided content looks good, but needs more clarification and context. Good work.

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