User:Mwongz/Carbon black/Aaronkroeker Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mwongz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
-Make the sentences shorter and simpler so they are easier to understand. This could involve splitting many of the single larger sentences into 2 or more smaller sentences.

-It also may be helpful to add images

-Other than that, it is well-sourced and informative