User:Mwongz/Carbon black/Elainewongso Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mwongz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mwongz/Carbon_black?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Carbon black

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Good lead as it explains why carbon black is used.

Content

Good content with not too much information. Terms used were also not unnecessarily technical and the information added was easy to comprehend.

Tone and balance

-Neutral tone and balance with no bias. The paragraphs added does showcase the advantages of carbon black in lithium-ion batteries.

Sources and references

-Adequate sources and references. A lot of citations were used to support the information added.

Organization

-Only one section with two subsections not much organization needed.

Images and Media

-No images or media added

-Should consider adding an illustration of the arragnement of crystals to provide an insight as to how the structure results in battery stability.