User:Mwongz/Carbon black/Sheryl Munshan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greta Margaux, AccountAlias, Mwongz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mwongz/Carbon_black?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Carbon black
 * Carbon black

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

From the work that I see, I believe that the authors would keep the article lead as to what currently is and add another section "Use in lithium ion batteries" to the current article which would definitely increase the credibility of the current article. The content is however relevant to the topic and is up to date. The added content is neutral and is not over or underrepresented. It also shows no signs of bias. The added content is also backed by thorough sources that are current. One of the references is present twice in the bibliography (number 2 and 3). There are no images however. Overall I believe addition of this piece of information to the current article would do a pretty good job.