User:Mwongz/Carbon black/Thebluecardigan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mwongz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mwongz/Carbon black
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Carbon black

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- The lead has not been updated, but it can be easily added to by saying something like "carbon black can be used in lithium ion batteries, because of ..."

- The sources are recent and reliable, and the links do work. The bibliography also looks good, I like how the sources were evaluated and compared. Great job on all the research so far.

- The content is without bias and the citations look correct.

- Overall, the wikipedia article is looking good. Maybe try linking the wikipedia page to "lithium-ion batteries," adding a photo of the battery, or adding a battery diagram to the page. Also, there are some run-on sentences in the paragraphs that can be condensed for clarity.