User:MxJuliaStark/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it has little to no current information in the article itself and I want to understand more about the topic of community diagnosis.

Evaluate the article
There is a definition of the topic but little else. However, the first sentence is not concise and uses big vocabulary words such as "quantities" and "identification" to define the term. The definition can be further broken down to help someone understand it at a glance. Additionally, another term to refer to the topic can be "community assessment" which is not noted anywhere in the wikipedia page. However, the article does link to the "health indicators" page. It only has two articles in the bibliography section and Wiki has flagged it as being insufficient for a page and that it could be deleted unless updated with more information.