User:Myadog23!/9to5/Avilolx Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Myadog23!, Junipurr2022


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 9to5

Evaluate the drafted changes
For images if they can find pictures of a group of the 9 to 5 members together and put it under their members selection it would fit really well

They could use to link a few more groups through Wikipedia like the SEIU Just so if somebody was wondering what it was they could figure it out.

I believe their first paragraph could have a little bit of better of an ending due to the fact that it kind of just stops after talking about one big victory they could add something along the lines of how nine to five is doing now or how it improved just a brief conclusion