User:Myadog23!/9to5/Lefty89 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?  Myadog23!, Junipurr2022

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing Editing User:Myadog23!/9to5 - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) 9to5 - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) 9to5 - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) I think they just need pictures and itll be nice!!!!