User:Myepez1998/Bikram Yoga/IDOSALSA101 Peer Review

General info
Myepez1998
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Myepez1998/Bikram Yoga - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Bikram Yoga - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

There is no lead in the draft yet.

Content

The content is relevant, but it is not up to date. The sources are from 2013 and 2015. There is no content that feels missing or out of place yet. The articel does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps.

Tone and Balance

The draft has a neutral tone and it does not appear heavily biased towards one point of view or position. The draft needs more sections and information to be critiqued for its balance.

Sources and References

The two sources provided are reliable and provide good information on the topic. Although they are not up to date as both sources were last update on 2013 and 2015. There are no references mentioned. I believe two three more sources will help a lot in making the article bigger.

Organization

There is only one section so I cannot really comment on the organization of the draft. Adding more sections and structuring it properly with good balance will help a lot in drafting a good article.

Images and Media

There are no images or media provided in the draft yet.

Overall Impressions

The article draft is well written and concise but it lacks a lot of content and sections also the lead. The sources provided are good but not up to date. There are only two sources provided and no references yet.