User:Myepez1998/Bikram Yoga/Pattycakekwan888 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * I am reviewing Myepez1998's article on Bikram Yoga.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Myepez1998/Bikram Yoga
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bikram Yoga
 * Bikram Yoga

Evaluate the drafted change
Hello Maria, your drafting is missing many key factors. First, there are no references to the information you have provided. This will easily be marked as a red flag as there are no references. I have also realized that the lead was copied and pasted from the original article on Bikram Yoga. After consulting with you, you mentioned you are interested in updating the health portion of this article, but you have not yet started on the health portion of the article. You should focus on the health of bikram yoga, and find sources related to it.

So there is not any content for me to talk upon, so I suggest that you start editing your draft and adding content.