User:MyersJam/Penn Street/MariiMarii28 Peer Review

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MyersJam


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The intro to your article is very straight tot the point, although, it can do without the last sentence to me. the overall organization of the article is well put together, and its clear to read and straight to the point. Therefore, this article meets the expectation in tone because it has a a neutral tone to it. I feel like a lil more research on the street and description could be added to the article. Although, the addition of the info box and picture is a great addition to your article to give readers more. However, the last part of the article could use some more descriptions of the places and maybe include if theses places are popular or regularly visited. also you should add some more pictures, maybe something with color to bring the readers in to your article more. on the other hand, the citations are done correctly and the resources used are reliable and work (link wise). The last thing recomended is that you should in include links to the restaurants and bar. Other than that, you have a great start to a great article.