User:Myk-0917/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Talk:Drinking water quality standards

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I think it is important to know what the criteria of the quality of drinking water is because driniking water is necessary for people's everyday lives. Also, I personally do not know about the standards, so I want to deepen my knowlegde through this activity.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * There is too much information in lead section.
 * The way of writing in lead section is like an essay, not encyclopedia.
 * Some information which are mentioned in lead section are not mentioend in the article.
 * About standards in countries, there are only mentioned about the US, Australia, and Europe. Also, I think people should not see Europe as one group.
 * People can include more sources in See Also section.
 * The contents are not updated recently.
 * The contents are detailed, but it is difficult for people to understand what the author wanted to convey.
 * The article is not related to sustanability.
 * People need to state what drinking water is.
 * People need more explanation about list section.
 * I cannot see consistency between lead section with other sections.
 * Some refrences are old, so it may not proper.
 * Some resources come from the same website or the same publisher, so the information may not be nuetral.
 * The article is written only in chemical aspects.
 * One of the good point of areticle is detailed chart. However, it is not completed and some part of the chart is empty.
 * In the talk page, people mention about low-quality of citations and incomplete chart.
 * The section titled "world health organization gidelines" is not kind to reader because there is only one line of explanation, and some difficult words and numerals are listed.
 * The status of this article is C.
 * People can include the information of drinking water quality standard from different aspects, such as environmental aspects and current situation around the world.
 * I think this article need more improvement, so I cannot say that this article is developed.