User:Mynw12344/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
India Arie

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because the artist it describes is someone who is very important to the upbringing of most African American adults. Many of the artists songs were played in my childhood home. Her lyrics and values exemplify the way I was taught to acquit myself.

Evaluate the article
The article starts out with a sentence that concisely and clearly describes the artist. However the lead paragraph does not include a brief description of the articles major sections. It mostly talks about album releases and awards. But all the information in the lead paragraph is also stated in the article. It is also very concise and not overly detailed. The articles content is relevant to the topic and up to date. The article is missing information on the artists current personal life, public image, information on individual albums, and any of the artists other ventures. The article does not address any historically underrepresented populations or topics, specifically the artist influence on African American women. But the article is very neutral with no detectable bias. All facts include sources with different authors for backing but many of them are not reliable. The links work fine, and the sources are current. There are many journals that can be used as sources to make the article better. The article is written very clearly and is very easy to read. But it does have a few grammatical errors. The article is organized into major sections but there are only 5 sections not including references. The article is definitly in its beginning stages and is under developed. But overall it is satisfactory.