User:Myousafi/User:Kavnaulakh/Homeless street outreach/Myousafi Peer Review

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 * User:Kavnaulakh/Homeless street outreach

Evaluate the drafted changes
Although the lead hasn’t seem to change it still reflects well on the content that is newly inputted. The lead does include a clear introductory sentence discussing the topic. The lead does not include a overview of the headlining topics or a roadmap but only discusses the idea of homelessness street outreach. Overall the paragraph of homeless street outreach is concise and very informational Content Added is very much needed to understand the basic needs for the unhoused and why they are focused on these material goods.Up to date information but does not seem to add citations of the content added, of where the information is coming from. Would recommend to add more sources.

Overall content seems needed and well thought out. The article does represent a underrepresented group and focuses on the needs of the surrounding questions that come about the topic. Tone and Balance of the contents added are very neutral, straight to the point and informational, do recommend to add citations and sources. To improve the quality of the article would recommend to include some research and data behind the numbers of unhoused individuals in certain areas. Real life case examples would be good.Overall great article and topic that is discussed!