User:Myspecialusername/Gender inequality in the United States/Emarsh375 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Myspecialusername


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Myspecialusername/Gender_inequality_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender inequality in the United States - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content


 * The content is definitely relevant to the topic. I would just add something about why race/ethnicity are important when discussing gender inequality. Although its obvious to us, it might not be to lay people. I mostly suggest this because some of your statistics are comparing cis women with each other and the article is titled "Gender Inequality..." so a lay person might think "these stats are about race/ethnicity, not gender." The content added is up to date and gender is part of it.

Tone and Balance


 * The content added is very neutral, and simply states facts. The tone and balance are great.

Sources and References


 * All content is backed up by sources and the links to the sources work. The information is up to date and they reflect the pov of historically marginalized individuals.