User:Mysticcrystals.777/Anchanchu/SleepyDragon18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mysticcrystals.777


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mysticcrystals.777/Anchanchu?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anchanchu

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I see a lot of improvement to the original Wikipedia page- you added a bit more context to the story of this demon, and you have a good start so far. The lead so far does its job of introducing the subject of the article, however I am curious to see the rest of it completed. I think you could add a few brief details about the other sections to add more to the intro. As for the rest of the article, finishing up the sentences and adding even more context could help to extend the paragraphs. Overall, it's off to a pretty good start, and looks like it's going to be an improvement.