User:Mysticpixie/New media/Takeyce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mysticpixie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mysticpixie/New_media?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * New media

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Mysticpixie, I think your edits to the lead improves this article by making it more concise and to the point. The addition of our class texts in the bibliography is also creates valuable resource as references. Would you place those in the "further reading" section as well?