User:MystifiedMysti/Squamish language/Emartinez203 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MystifiedMysti, Nataliawrobel3, Omaralattar23, SonaniVandan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MystifiedMysti/Squamish_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Squamish language

Evaluate the drafted changes
The info in the sandbox seems to really add to the lead section. I'm not sure if the way it's setup is the way it's planned to go live, but I definitely think you guys can play around with the order. In the sandbox, your citations are super useful. On the actual article however, it seems like there might be citations missing, it might be useful to look into what could be cited. Overall the setup looks good, for the documentation section maybe soem information of that section could lend itself to improving the lead section.