User:MystifiedMysti/Squamish language/Maradeleonm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Squamish language sandbox


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MystifiedMysti/Squamish_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Squamish language

Evaluate the drafted changes
I looked into the sandbox and I liked the information that was there, I thought it was important information to make accessible to people. I also think they were interesting facts about the language that by adding them to the article it would make it more interesting for readers. I like that they are clear and concise. It is neutral, there is no bias or opinion and the sources are cited.

I would just think of a way to put it all together and not just separate sentences. Other than that I think it looks good and its a good contribution to wikipedia c: