User:MystifiedMysti/Squamish language/Sote2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SonaniVandan, Omaralattar23, Nataliawrobel3, MystifiedMysti


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Squamish language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Squamish language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

peer review of " the content is good just need some touch up in a few sentences."

peer review of " very detailed has a lot of information"