User:Mz6300/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Global Ocean Ecosystem Dynamics

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have never heard of this committee before, but it seems like an extremely important topic to focus on given how dire the current state of our climate is. I would like to make sure everyone has an overview of this topic, and that it is thorough for people who are interested in getting to know more about what they can do as individuals to better the environment as well.

Evaluate the article
Lead section: concise, but mentions much of the core projects that are not elaborated on later in the article.

Content: Most recent report mentioned from 2004, needs to be updated to reflect present day. Missing content about forecasting, and how it does more to share with the community their findings

Tone and balance: good, neutral, no bias

Sources and reference: no sources besides the GLOBEC website - no literature on topic, only the website which would have only biased information.

Organization and writing quality: some minor grammatical errors, could work on the flow a little better.

images and media: Good graphic of countries participating in GLOBEC at the moment and the logo, maybe could include examples of the recent report and images used in those reports

Talk page: no conversations going on, seems like the page was written by one user only. rated Start class and mid-importance. improves WikiProject Fisheries and Fishing

Overall impressions: overall status is important, but not many people have done work to improve this page. Underdeveloped and could use more content and updated information