User:Mzimet/Disordered eating/Jessica nakkoul Peer Review

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Mzimet


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 * Disordered eating

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Very great job! I really enjoyed how you wrote about athletes because I know many people who had to lose weight really quick during sports like wrestling for example. I believe it can be a little longer by adding health issues that can be caused and all the different types of eating disorders with small summaries of each. It was well written and easy to follow along with. Great job again!

Peer Review Response
Hi there Jessica! Thank you so much for your feed back it was very kind. I think you make a really really great point about including the medical repercussions caused by eating disorders. With spectrum of disordered eating that can occur there is a wide range of medical conditions that can accompany an eating disorder. All of which can have detrimental effects on the persons health and more so contribute to low health so I think its a great topic point to include! Thanks so much Jessica!