User:N.benavides25/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Candida Höfer

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because I have an interest in architecture and photography. I also have to contribute to an article for my class assignment and felt that this article needed some work so I could envision my contribution. My preliminary impression was that it could use more details, and it matters to add to the body of work because more people should know about Candida Hofer. I hope information that I add would be helpful for readers/researchers and can be built upon by others in the future.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead Section

I feel the lead section is adequate, I think more information could be added such as "She is known as a renowned photographer known for her exploration of public spaces and architecture. Transitioning from portraiture to focusing on spaces like libraries and museums, Höfer's work delves into the relationship between architecture and human experience."

Content

I think the content is relevant and up to date based on my research. I think that there is no stand out content that doesn't belong. The article can improve on addressing topics related to historically underrepresented populations. I think I could add more to her Turks in Germany series.

Tone and Balance

The article is neutral, no biases or minority fringe viewpoints described. No techniques used to attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or another.

Sources and References

From my research, I see that the sources listed are correct and credible.

Organization and Writing Quality

The article is organized well and well written.

Images and Media

There are not enough images, and I think this area could be improved upon. I would like to add more examples of her work.

Overall Impressions

The article is adequate, but I think more can be said overall. It is in need of pictures, and I can elaborate on her philosophical underpinnings within her work and representation of different ethnic groups in her work.