User:NAS26/Angela Robinson (filmmaker)/Catherinefort Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NAS26


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NAS26/Angela_Robinson_%28filmmaker%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Angela Robinson (filmmaker)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall these are strong additions to this page. I would recommend making small adjustments to some of your additions so they are more objective and neutral.

For example, you could rephrase "In 2021, Robinson signed a deal with Warner Bros. Television Group to create scripted television programs for Warner Bros platforms like HBOMax, basic and premium cable channels and broadcast networks. "

to "In 2021, Robinson signed a deal with Warner Bros. Television Group to create scripted television programs for Warner Bros platforms including HBOMax, basic and premium cable channels and broadcast networks."

It seems like there is not much information about Robinson's early life or entry into the industry but if you can find anything more I think it would help fill out this bio!