User:NBezzina/Clupeidae/Ly1729560145 Peer Review

Article have included enough detail, including reasonable explanations, of the feeding behavior of Clupeidae. From tooth to feeding habit, and from feeding habit to diet(and similar process with the last paragraph of explaining the body shape and how that effects feeding behaviors), the logic is clear that anyone without biological basic knowledges would be able to understand it. However, this article does lack pictures for demonstration, and for someone who are not familiar with clupeidae it is hard to relate the letters with the actual fish (unless they search google for the tooth of Clupeidae, but it might look weird to do so when they are already reading Wikipedia).

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