User:NJSanta/Hot air balloon/Afv513 Peer Review

General info
NJSanta
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:NJSanta/Hot air balloon
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hot air balloon

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall:

 * The leading sentence is appropriate for the following subjects.
 * The types of hot air balloons titled shows promise for more information to come.
 * The references used are okay, but could benefit from more scholarly resources.
 * I'm not sure how this addition to the construction section of the article will fit as currently it's theme is the components of a hot air balloon, but the content is worthwhile and can benefit the article.

Over Observation Balloon Section

 * All sentences are cited.
 * Content is concise and makes sense together.
 * Tone is balanced.