User:NJSanta/Hot air balloon/Editinglad Peer Review

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NJsanta
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 * User:NJSanta/Hot air balloon
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 * Hot air balloon

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like the addition of examples of the types of hot air balloons and explanations of the observation balloons, but after reading the observation balloon article it seems that they were used earlier than the American civil war. You may also want to add a little bit about more modern observation balloons since they have been used all the way up through the cold war consistently. It would be interesting to see the design change throughout the time used. be careful to not go to in depth since their is already a decently sized article on observation balloons.

A small example image of each type of balloon would probably help with comprehension of the design differences.

do the listed types of balloons cover a majority of the major application that hot air balloons are used in?

I believe Zeppelins don't count as hot air balloons since they are a rigid airship and don't seem to use heated gas to create the lift.