User:NJSanta/Hot air balloon/ElizaJane11 Peer Review

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NJSanta
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I think that there is a really good start to a very interesting article in their sandbox. The only thing I would suggest is beefing up the content. It is easier to get started on writing when you just get the words on the paper and then coming back through and fine tuning and editing the things out that you do not need. I will say what is written is quality content, it gives interesting information pertaining to the topic at hand, the author also has made sure to correctly site every sentence. Their organization is good, but they need to have a bigger lead. So far it is just one sentence, and this is going back to the quantity of the content, but it needs to be more of an introduction. There are no pictures added so far which is fine, but that might be something that could add even more interest to the article. It would be helpful to have pictures of each type of hot air balloon discussed and that would also help the reader to better understand and visualize the descriptions that are listed. I think that once there is more information added and the author works on this a little more the addition to the article will be very valuable and relevant. Overall, a great start to an interesting article! Just add some more information, write at least a rough draft for each section so editing it will be easier, and add some pictures.