User:NPierre11/Social narrative/JZellMitch Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NPierre11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NPierre11/Social_narrative?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social narrative

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

LEAD: Maybe begin the article with a complete sentence. If you want to start with the question, answer in a complete sentence. Consider varying the sentence structure so that fewer sentences with the same words 'Social narratives'. Double check the content here to make sure it flows nicely. 'Social narratives often use personalized stories to teach various skills such as skill, identify a situation or tell a narrative;' This sentence is unclear. I can't tell what skill you are referring to and I'm not getting a clear picture of what social narratives are. Would it be okay to list some skills that have been taught using social narratives...what is the research saying? May be beneficial to note that these are brief narratives written from the learner's perspective. You could also share who could use social narratives...can families use them or just professionals?

BODY: I'm confused by the fact that the draft portion is identical to the article in Wikipedia, with the exception of Lead section and a couple of reference numbers. I saw two additional references. If Types Social Narratives is one the 3 areas that you were to edit, there must be a difference between what is in the draft and what is in the current Wikipedia article.