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Observations made
Problems that the article: Pet insurance has:


 * 1) It needs additional citations for verification because some information provided there it doesn't come from a reliable source that you can verify that what you're reading it comes from a verifiable material. Everything provided as an information it has to come from a trustworthy source of information. The information that you provide there it can't be from your own information (provided by your own knowledge) because as the "Wikipedia: Verifiability" article stablish, the information should come from a documented source where all the people that access to the article can check and know that the information provided is reliable.
 * 2) The article is giving advertisements which is not part of the content that should be provided on Wikipedia. As the information it provides the article: "Wikipedia: "What Wikipedia is not" Wikipedia articles should never include information of propaganda. The information included should be written in a neutral point of view.
 * 3) Lastly, the tone of this article doesn't follow the structure of a neutral encyclopedia article. As it mentions in the article: "Wikipedia: Writing better articles" the uses of pronouns should be used with no specific gender. The information should be neutral and not related to a point of view (when you use the pronouns: I, me, my, and more).

Editing draft
A fragment from the article Pet insurance (which needed a comma; see the correction below):


 * "Dental care, prescription drugs   and alternative treatments, such as physiotherapy and acupuncture, are also covered by some providers."

Changes made in the article: Pet insurance
Added an oxford comma and one citation. The citation: (the number after this sentence)  

What is a health insurance?
A health insurance is a coverage directed to a living being for medicinal costs. Clearly, for medical expenses and all what includes, it depends on the selected type of coverage. A health insurance provides, to the injured living being, a quality of maintenance and security related to medical attention.

What is a pet insurance?
A pet insurance is when the owner of an animal decides to pay for a specific type of pet health insurance to protect it (if provided by the specific choice made) and give medical attention to the pet or the pets. All of this depends on what type of insurance a pet has.

Two categories of the insurance
This category is when the pet gets sick and the insurance covers the medical attention needed (all of this depends on the requirements for the coverage). This category of pet liability insurance it applies in some cases when the pet causes a lose to someone's financials or if the pet bites another pet or a person.
 * Pet medical insurance:
 * Pet liability insurance: