User:NSB5203/Death of Vincent van Gogh/Marleekochman24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NSB5203


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Death of Vincent van Gogh


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Death of Vincent van Gogh - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your article draft looks great. I think that the sources that you used were very reliable and have good information presented in them that really helped to strengthen this article. I also think the details that you added were key and definitely made the article stronger. I also think you did a great job at staying neutral and only stating facts. The facts that you are planning on adding are also very informative and definitely seem key to Van Gogh’s life. The only thing I would suggest is maybe adding a few more details about each of the things you are adding that way they tie into the article a little better and make complete sense regarding the previous information in each section. Also, I think just double checking on a few grammatical errors would help to strengthen your edits. Overall, you definitely increased the quality of the article by adding new facts to each section and using reliable resources to do so.