User:N hatem2001/Chaurasi Khamba Mosque/SherifaOsman Peer Review

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 * N hatem2001


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Thank You Nadeen for the Article.

The Language used is easy to understand,concise and unbiased. I would recommend if you re-organize the "About" section as it has several smaller ones that could be gathered in whole ones, such as the "Religious" and "Cultural" Significance sections can be gathered in one Paragraph "Significance". Also, you can end your article with the "Tourist Attraction Section" as it's really interesting to finalize the reading with. Adding some visuals in the plan and the decoration sections would make it easier in linking the great information you provided with the reality.