User:N insinna12/Hip hop and social injustice/Jackiemcdonnell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

N insinnia12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:N%20insinna12/Hip_hop_and_social_injustice?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hip hop and social injustice

Evaluate the drafted changes
The work is well written but it has a few grammatical mistakes. Some commas are needed and sentences can be broken down for them to sound more clear. The sources have working links and appear to be trusted sources. The overall article is organized and flows together well. The lead sentence explains what this section of the article is about and is clear. The article uses concrete facts so it is neutral. There really isn't a side to choose for a topic like this. This article meets wikipedias requirements. If the editor wanted to add more information, they could talk more about racial injustices today against African Americans. The strength of the content added is that it incudes concrete facts.