User:Nabila Leb/Tamara El-Zein/Mirna Kalash Itani Peer Review

General info
Tamara el Zein
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nabila%20Leb/Tamara_El-Zein/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)