User:Nadirkhan124/Sodium-motive force/Kkiing08 Peer Review

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Overall, this is an awesome and well writing article. The flow and the inclusion of your references throughout the article so far is well though out and put together. If there's one thing I may add is that your group includes a lead in this article to give the reader a better insight of what can be expected throughout the article.