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Providing tobacco cessation treatment, etc

Notes for assigned article:


 * Evaluating content:
 * The lead section is too lengthy so need to concise
 * The presentation section needs organization
 * Wording and sentence structures are not appropriate
 * Missing citations
 * Evaluating Tone
 * Tone needs to be fixed as how the child deals with epilepsy can be challenging and so wordings needs to sensitive and accurate
 * Look into what is under/over represented in the content
 * Evaluating resources
 * Missing citations in certain parts
 * Most of the resources are primary and not reliable enough such as medicalnews for source 2