User:Naigel51/Busch Gardens Williamsburg/Foxvl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Naigel51


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Naigel51/Busch_Gardens_Williamsburg?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Busch Gardens Williamsburg

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead does include an introductory sentence and I believe that it is done very well however in the Ireland section it is very wordy.
 * The content added is relevant to the topic and I don't believe needs to be changed.
 * The content added is neutral and I don't believe that anything is written in a way that could be taken bad by someone.
 * I believe the information is reliable, however the Amusement Business' source is very old which could be a factor.
 * The content added is well organized and I don't believe it needs any changes