User:Naigel51/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Busch Gardens Williamsburg - Wikipedia

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
I have visited this park in the past and greatly enjoyed my experience. I would like to evaluate this article for a school assignment and hopefully be able to learn more about the park!

Evaluate the article

 * lead section overly detailed
 * overall tone does not reflect encyclopedic tone
 * some phrasing could use some adjustments
 * some hamlet sections either need more or less info
 * maybe move Sesame Street section so it's not in-between the main country hamlets
 * add some updated/better pictures
 * add updated statistics/info on various awards won by park
 * update various pieces of information
 * grammar seems fine for the most part at a glance, but some minor adjustments are needed in some areas