User:Nakaya16/Nurse practitioner/Dowk29 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nakaya16


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FUser%3ANakaya16%2FNurse_practitioner&data=04%7C01%7Cltddc%40iup.edu%7Cf12d2027f321472e9e7808da0e903ee9%7C96704ed7a3e14bb8ba918b63ee16883e%7C0%7C0%7C637838310080811206%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=SQ6EH9lmWJl4qfK98tm3XXAXgLa%2B2MCvldiRzQCReH4%3D&reserved=0
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nurse practitioner

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * hit good eduction points with how to become a nurse practitioner
 * information is misspelled in background, sentence 2
 * the quote in characteristics shouldn't be one sentence, combined it with sentence before.
 * "guidance like .N. Nurse practitioner" doesn't make sense in primary care shortage
 * (pnP) the p should be capitalized