User:Nala025/Depression in childhood and adolescence/Cali0323 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nala025


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 * User:Nala025/Depression in childhood and adolescence
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your paragraph sounds good so far.

I would take out the comma after the word "school" and I would also make the word "overlook" to "overlooked."

You also said "especially amongst females," I think this is okay but would this be considered biased towards women? Like should you also mention that it is also common in males too? I don't know if that is accurate but I feel like maybe you should talk about both genders that way it is equal.

I think you're off to a great start!