User:Nala025/Depression in childhood and adolescence/Dtm016 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nala025


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nala025/Depression in childhood and adolescence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Depression in childhood and adolescence

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content that was added is relevant to the topic and I think the information added is a good addition to the article. It also represents underrepresented groups (women). The content reflects what the cited sources say and the sources are current. The content is clear and easy to read, I think the only thing would be a few grammatical errors. The content seems similar to the introduction for the article so I think it would be good to take some of it and add it to the intro, instead of it being its own paragraph.