User:Nali12/sandbox

Instructor's feedback, April 30
The revised character list is not an improvement to the site as it stands. It is no longer plagiarized, but it has a lot of errors and misleading information. I do not approve implementing all changes.

I approve only the following changes:

- Please copy and paste the following dash in between character names and descriptions: –

For example: *White King – alludes to King James I of England, Protestant leader of the White House.

(Note that "–" is longer than a hyphen)

- Please add "Protestant leader of the White House" to White King

- Please add "Catholic leader of the Black House" to Black King.

- Change the Black Duke entry as follows: *Black Duke alludes to Gaspar de Guzmán, Count-Duke of Olivares, a favourite of Philip IV

- Delete the citation to Gary Taylor's edition, since it is no longer necessary

Please implement these changes (and only the changes I have listed -- not the others you have drafted in your revised character list) between now and May 3.

Instructor feedback
This team's peer reviewed character list is plagiarized from the edition we used in class. The character descriptions are too close to those in Gary Taylor's edition.

Please do not add your character descriptions to the Wikipedia article. It would have been okay to use Gary Taylor's edition as a source and a guide, but the descriptions needed to be in your own words, on the basis of your knowledge of the play.

See the following for more info: https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students/plagiarism

Your group may do two things:

1) change "based on" to "alludes to" in the character descriptions

2) regularize the spacing and formatting of the character descriptions

To be clear: I do not approve implementing any other changes. If you have further edits to propose, you may list them (be specific) in the Wikipedia reflection essay. When I return that assignment with your grade, I will let you know if I approve further changes.

When you submit your Wikipedia reflection essay, please be specific about what you personally contributed to the team, including if you made suggested edits that were deleted or modified, and what exactly those edits were.

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Characters

 * White King James Alludes to King James I of England, the most powerful man in Protestant England, main protector of England, and father of the King White Charles knight, and the White Queen.
 * White Knight Charles Alludes to King Charles I of England, the heir to King James.
 * White Queen Alludes to Elizabeth Stuart, Queen of Bohemia.


 * White Duke of Buckingham Alludes to George Villiers, Duke of Buckingham he is dear friend of White Knight Charles.


 * Fat Bishop of Spalato is the White House Bishop. A Greedy and disloyal author. Moved to the White side due to feelings of being insignificant.


 * White Bishop's Gelded Pawn The White Queen Bishop's pawn, who was castrated at the hand's of the black house and an object of the Virgin White Queen's eyes.
 * Virgin White Queen's is a devoted and chaste protestant woman. She is a victim of sexual violence at the hands of the black house, and her biggest desire is a loving husband.


 * Black House
 * Black King Felipe Alludes to King Philip IV of Spain. Leader of the Black House.
 * Black Queen Maria Alludes to Maria Anna of Spain. Princess of the Black House. Future Queen of the White House after proposal from White Knight Charles.
 * Black Knight Gondormar Alludes to Diego Sarmiento de Acuña. Knight of the Black Queen and ambassador to the White House after leaving Black King Felipe.
 * Jesuit Black Bishop Alludes to the Father-General of the Jesuits. Leader of all Jesuits.
 * Jesuit Black Bishop's Pawn An England Priest with excessive sexual desires and a confessor to the Black Knight, Black Knight's Pawn, Black Queen's Pawn and White Queen's Pawn.
 * Jesuit Black Queen's Pawn Apart of the female Jesuits, has relations with by the Black Bishop's pawn.
 * Black Knight's Pawn Servant of the Black Knight and suitor to the White Queen's Pawn. Castrated the White Bishop's Pawn who is known as his sexual rival.
 * Black Duke Olivares Alludes to Gaspar de Guzmán. Black Queen's Duke and favorite of the court. Has relations with Black King Felipe (assumed to be his lover).
 * Black pawn a servant to the Black House.


 * Opening Sequence
 * Ignatius Loyola is a ghost of the founder of the Jusuits
 * Error is an allegorical personification of religious heresy
 * Prologue introduces the game and characters

Peer Review

 * White House
 * White King James alludes to King James I of England. Leader of the White House and father of White Knight Charles. Financier of the Fat Bishop of Spalato and advisor to the White King's Pawn.
 * White Knight Charles alludes to Prince Charles. White Queen's Knight and heir of White King James. Knight of the Order of the Garter and champion of the English Protestant.
 * White Queen alludes to Elizabeth Stuart. Queen of Bohemia and daughter of King James. Financier of the White Queen's Pawn. A desirable object for Black King Felipe.
 * White Duke of Buckingham alludes to George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham. White Queen's Duke and friend of White Knight Charles. Favorite of the court in relation to White King James.
 * Fat Bishop alludes to Marc Antonio de Dominis, Bishop of Spalato. The White King's Bishop. A lascivious and greedy author. A previous Catholic who converted to Protestant. A new member of the White House.
 * White Bishop's Gelded Pawn the White Queen Bishop's pawn and a Protestant minister and later castrated by his competitor Black Knight's Pawn Gelder. Formally engaged to the White Queen's Pawn.
 * Virgin White Queen's Pawn a devoted and chaste protestant woman. Corrupted by the members of the Black House. Formally engaged to the White Bishop's Pawn before his castration.


 * Black House
 * Black King Felipe alludes to King Philip IV of Spain. Lascivious Spanish Catholic and leader of the Black House.
 * Black Queen Maria alludes to Maria Anna of Spain. Spanish princess of the Black House. Intended future Queen of the White House after proposal from White Knight Charles.
 * Black Knight Gondormar alludes to Diego Sarmiento de Acuña. Knight of the Black Queen and ambassador to the White House after Black King Felipe.
 * Jesuit Black Bishop alludes to the Father-General of the Jesuits. Leader of all Jesuits.
 * Jesuit Black Bishop's Pawn a lascivious Priest and a confessor to the Black Knight, Black Knight's Pawn, Black Queen's Pawn and White Queen's Pawn.
 * Jesuit Black Queen's Pawn apart of the female Jesuits, has relations with by the Black Bishop's pawn.
 * Black Knight's Pawn servant of the Black Knight and unsuccessful suitor to the White Queen's Pawn. Castrated the White Bishop's Pawn who is known as his sexual rival.
 * Black Duke Olivares alludes to Gaspar de Guzmán. Black Queen's Duke and favorite of the court. Has relations with Black King Felipe (assumed to be his lover).
 * Black pawn a servant to the Black House.


 * Opening Sequence
 * Ignatius Loyola is a ghost of the founder of the Jusuits
 * Error is an allegorical personification of religious heresy
 * Prologue introduces the game and character

Characters Revision

 * White House
 * White King James alludes to King James I of England. Leader and protector of the White House and father of White Knight Charles and the White Queen. The most powerful man in Protestant England.
 * White Knight Charles alludes to Prince Charles. White Queen's Knight and heir of White King James. Knight of the Order of the Garter and champion of the English Protestant.
 * White Queen alludes to Elizabeth Stuart. Queen of Bohemia.
 * White Duke of Buckingham alludes to George Villiers, 1st Duke of Buckingham. The best friend of King James, most trusted man of the White Royals.
 * Fat Bishop alludes to Marc Antonio de Dominis, Bishop of Spalato. The White King's Bishop. A greedy and power hungry author who left the black side due to feelings of insignificance. Profits off writing books that are against the black house.
 * White Bishop's Gelded Pawn the White Queen Bishop's pawn, formally engaged to the White Queen's Pawn but, was castrated by the black house.
 * Virgin White Queen's Pawn a devoted and chaste protestant woman, has a strong desire for a loving husband. A representation of the common English woman, and a victim of sexual violence at the hands of the black house.


 * Black House
 * Black King Felipe alludes to King Philip IV of Spain. Catholic leader of the Black House.
 * Black Queen Maria alludes to Maria Anna of Spain. Queen of the White House and Princess of the Black House.
 * Black Knight Gondormar alludes to Diego Sarmiento de Acuña. Knight of the Black Queen and ambassador to the White House.
 * Jesuit Black Bishop alludes to the Father-General of the Jesuits. Leader of all Jesuits.
 * Jesuit Black Bishop's Pawn a Priest and confessors to numerous characters including the Black Knight, Black Knight's Pawn, Black Queen's Pawn and White Queen's Pawn.
 * Jesuit Black Queen's Pawn a female Jesuit.
 * Black Knight's Pawn a castrated servant of the Black Knight and unsuccessful suitor.
 * Black Duke Olivares alludes to Gaspar de Guzmán. Black Queen's Duke and well-liked within the court. Assumed to have relations with Black King Felipe.
 * Black pawn a servant to the Black House.


 * Opening Sequence
 * Ignatius Loyola is a ghost of the founder of the Jusuits
 * Error is an allegorical personification of religious heresy
 * Prologue introduces the game and characters