User:Nansks/Halbic languages/Rebeccaward12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Halbic Languages


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Halbic languages

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead- the lead clearly states what content is shown on the page and it's easy to get to all the other languages within this group of languages, it's concise and conveys enough information.

Content- the content is relevant but there is nowhere near enough to fully explain the topic. The languages linked have enough information for the most part except for the links for Halbi, Bhatri, Kamar, Mirgan and Nahari.

Sources- there are none, there are a few in the five links stated above but none on this page specifically.

Overall Impression- there are no images or sources, there's actually nothing in the article besides the lead, which I do think is a good lead to start this article. But the rest of the article needs to be added before it can be called a good article overall.