User:Naomistow31/Extraterrestrial life/Bryanhuynh8 Peer Review

General info
Naomistow31
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Naomistow31/Extraterrestrial_life?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Extraterrestrial life

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: I think that while the lead paragraph is well written, there are a few sentences which do run long. I would suggest trimming some of them down.

Content: I think you did a good job explaining how harsh environments on Earth could harbor new life. You also clearly explained how if the same conditions were to be hypothetically created on other planets, new life could form as well. Something that I would suggest is to

Tone & Balance: The overall tone of the article is neutral, you did a good job of no conveying any bias.

Sources & References: The sources you provided are all relevant. All of the links work. I would make sure that terms that are not as known (Earth, Hydrothermal Vent) are linked to their respective Wikipedia articles.

Organization: I think that you could break down the paragraphs into smaller sections.

Images & Media: There is are no images in your draft. I would recommend adding an image in order to add a visual element in your article.

Overall: Overall I do like what you have so far. The paragraphs that you have written so far are well done. My main suggestions are to add a photo in order to add a visual element to your work and to break down the paragraphs that you have into smaller ones. Great job!