User:Naomitrott/Blue revolution/Anchovyue Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Naomitrott


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Naomitrott/Blue revolution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Blue revolution

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Naomi,

Great lead that gives a good overview of your topic. This is an interesting topic and informative article. I like the timeline that you walk us through in the growth section, as well as regional considerations. Some notes to consider:


 * 1) For the "Growth of Aquaculture Production" header, for continuity sake, would it make more sense to include "Blue Revolution"? (i.e. Emergence of the Blue Revolution... or something that incorporates your article name into it)
 * 2) I would like to see more from the "Freshwater Aquaculture" section-- it seems important to the growth of the Blue Revolution. It could potentially even be developed into its own article actually.
 * 3) You mention potential benefits of the Blue Revolution, I'm wondering if there are any notable negative impacts (e.g. on the environment perhaps) that you could expand on in another section?
 * 4) Great use of hyperlinks.
 * 5) I would consider the use of "underdeveloped country" rather than "developing country".

Great work on this otherwise. Looking forward to seeing more from you.

All the best,

Alice