User:NapoleonKreka/Tasneem Zehra Husain/Noneill2004!! Peer Review

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NapoleonKreka
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Tasneem Zehra Husain
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Tasneem Zehra Husain

Evaluate the drafted changes
I noticed that this article has more references contributed than changing of the writing, so I will be evaluating that as well as the article.

In terms of sources it seems that more will need to be added, since sections don't have any sources and some are very limited, but I see that whoever is editing this article has started that already. I would simply suggest to keep working on this.

The article itself is pretty short, however maybe there is not much information on this person elsewhere on the internet. The only section that seems to be very short where more information should be available is the career section. Adding more there would make the article feel more complete in my opinion, because the reason people are looking this person up is probably for this reason. Also there is an odd section just titles "Husain in Europe" that I feel could be incorporated into the education section since it is just about her completing her PhD. I would also combine her career in physics and advocating for physics in Pakistan under the same heading maybe just under different subheadings.

This article contains good information it just needs some reorganizing and some additions to the source list.