User:Narcissusgasp/Auriculella perpusilla

Comments by A. Faucci (Apr 5, 2024):

Nice work on finding some great information. To polish your draft before copying it over to the main article please work on the following:


 * Make sure you only include content that is important to your species. Anything about land snails in general should go on that respective Wikipedia page and not here. remember this is an encyclopedia where people try to get some information, not just reading enjoyment. So, no extra words or sentences without information.
 * Distribution: I would change the heading to Distribution & Habitat. Start generally, by stating again that this species is endemic to oahu, Hawaii, then go into more details of where on Oahu and what kind of habitat. Also, combine sentences 2 and 3 as right now they kinda say the same thing. it might be better to start with a general sentence on where it can be found. Can you be more specific in your last sentences? Is it a smaller part of the original range or somewhere new entirely?
 * Distribution: change the font so it is not in bold.
 * Change the Anatomy heading to Description. Change the font that it is not in italic (other than the scientific species name). Add something about the color of the shell.
 * Make sure all your scientific species names are in italics. Also, the genus needs to be written out at the beginning of a sentence.
 * Make sure your sentences are all in perfect English and grammar and are easily understandable for a worldwide audience.
 * Find 2 more source to get to the required 5. Also, the formatting of your sources looks a little funny. make sure you use the "cite function correctly and use the automatic function if possible.

Auriculella perpusilla is a species of tropical air-breathing land snails, terrestrial pulmonate gastropod mollusks. This species is endemic to Hawaii.

Distribution
'In the past, Auriculella perpusilla'' inhabited wide parts of Eastern and North-Eastern Oʻahu. This land snail was prevalent in the wet, rain-abundant forest-mountain regions. Generally speaking, these snails were present all throughout the Koʻolau Mountain Range. Today, this species has been recorded to only be found in a specific mountain region near Honolulu. '''

Anatomy
A. perpusilla is incredibly small, with most having a height of around 6 millimeters in their adult shells. This snail species has a thin shell that has 5 strongly convex whorls with low spires and weakly reflected apertures.