User:Nariyahg/Mwangi Hutter/Dihstortion Peer Review

General info
Nariyahg
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ingrid Mwangi
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ingrid Mwangi

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Provided introduction line to Mwangi, was very brief and to the point as who she was and how "Mwangi Hutter"

- The Lead is concise, not too overly detailed or underwhelming

- The sections provided were insightful of her early life and career with a brief explaining of what her artwork consist of

- Organization was very clear and easy to read, each section was broken down in a good and understanding sequence.

- Overall great presentation and easy to follow from top to bottom

- Good variety of sources used

- Each source always had something different in regards to Mwangi, providing a lot of information on who she was and her works but all perspectives varied. Not every source addressed the same thing more than once.

- All the sources/links provided worked expect the last one, it doesn't direct me to an exact website and is a blank white screen: "Mwangi Hutter". Mwangi Hutter. Retrieved 23 March 2019