User:Narmstrong1010/Internet activism/Spokane1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Narmstrong1010


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Narmstrong1010/Internet_activism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Internet activism

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The user added in content about the use of internet activism in United States politics. It was helpful in the sense that the content added, contributes more information about how exactly internet activism plays a role in US politics because previously there was not a concrete example of a time when activism on the internet involved politics. The information added first revolved around Obama's campaign in the 2008 election and elaborated on how people used digital ads on YouTube in a contest to support Obama. However, for the sake of organization, subheadings could be added in under the main heading of "Use of political campaigns" just to help the reader understand. The subheadings could be something like "2008 Campaign" and "2016 Campaign".

The information added is relevant and current because it is important to know when people started utilizing Internet activism especially in the political sphere. It could help to clarify what "echo chambers" are as was added in the last paragraph. It might be useful to also look at the recent content of Internet activism from the 2020 election in order to have a more complete picture.

https://www.pewresearch.org/topic/internet-technology/politics-online/online-activism/

Here is a potential source for Internet activism of 2020 election.