User:Nashley12/History of tuberculosis/Aliroc065 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nashley12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nashley12/History of tuberculosis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of tuberculosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems like you've done a good job of incorporating some information on underrepresented groups, like the Mexican population in L.A.

This article seems to discuss a lot of information regarding the treatments and vaccines, and also includes a lot of information focusing in New York City. I believe that your addition to the article will strengthen the information that is available on the United States. However, it could be a little more specific. What types of frontline jobs were the Mexicans in L.A. holding that were putting them at risk? Why did these jobs make them more susceptible? Overall, I think your piece is well written but may lack a specific details, it just feels a little generalized.